Thursday, March 4, 2010

Peaceful, Graceful, Beautiful

Connor has really gotten into writing lately.... I'm amazed at what he can put down on paper in a matter of minutes. He has been doing quite a bit of writing in his Language Arts class lately. This is a poem he wrote off the top of his head...

***As most of you know Connor has loved Moose since he was very small


Peaceful, Graceful, Beautiful
Moose...
Peaceful
Graceful
Beautiful
The water laps around his legs...
Peaceful
Graceful
Beautiful
He sifts through the cold murky water with his nose...
Peaceful
Graceful
Beautiful
His shadow casts on the water with a glint...
Peaceful
Graceful
Beautiful

6 comments:

blueviolet said...

That's really a beautiful piece! :)

Lindsay said...

What a beautiful poem!!

Anita said...

Wow, that is so beautiful. Hug that boy!!

Sheri said...

Simple, yet powerful!

Terra said...

WOW, I love that! Tel Connor he did great!!!

The Bailey Family said...

He is really good Bonnie --this is really beautiful!